Does this help the action at all?

Good installment, punchy, quick, running after the heart in the street is a great gritty and visual image. Can't wait for more. Why this particular mark...it had better not be her brother or cousin or something like that. And don't go all truly cheesy and have her fall in love with him...unless you pull it off right. You've set yourself up for a fall here...but you did that with Trial of Sight, too, so I'm betting you can get through this satisfactorily.